Saturday, October 23, 2010


It's almost October now
Almost in the end year 2010
The year that
Hard to feel and walk
Although it were that situation
I just take a hold
And walk towards it.

During all those years
4 months lately
Is the tough experience
That I had too feel it
Faith still and always with me.
A lot of people left me
Ignoring me
Mocking me
Insulting me
Hate me so deep into their heart
And somebody had cursed me
Am I wrong?
If I'm wrong
I'm begging you an apologize.
And lastly I take
A major step in my life
Although it's burden or else
Or I'll get nothing at last
I can accept that
Because I'm nothing, right?
Decided it yourself.

--------ToKaN AL-MaNSuR--------


  1. nice.
    btw, watch the grammars.
    maybe u can use abstract adjectives.
    and old english. like thee,thou,thy etc.

  2. haha, those craps...
    I didn't have a qualification...